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Dammit. Dammit. Dammit.
Retrospect is so...
racy
in suspense
strung up from
chimerical ceilings
& so cheeky...
caught in little elastic things
Prim trots upon
cobblestoned corners
cracks caulked in ice
Taxpayers
only approved concrete
But you
are a patsy for pretentious
particulars
Soy in that latte
(Right then I should've fled)
like a watery
show of coffee
could achieve
fucking anything
Bloodless cheeks
screamed
when confronted
that chilled spring
...should've been my
red-less
red light
Should've told me
everything
Published 16th Dec 2017
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16th Dec 2017 7:17am
Which just goes to prove, hindsight is 20/20 and even so, still needs to be said...
Excellent ink!
JJ
Excellent ink!
JJ
16th Dec 2017 7:19am
Thank you my kind sir!
It truly is. I wager there is an entire library's worth on this site alone, we've all had our moments of reflection. I appreciate the feedback :)
It truly is. I wager there is an entire library's worth on this site alone, we've all had our moments of reflection. I appreciate the feedback :)
16th Dec 2017 10:18am
16th Dec 2017 6:56pm
16th Dec 2017 5:22pm
I see a theme of colors that taunt the poet. There is also the concept of more being less.
16th Dec 2017 7:01pm
16th Dec 2017 6:56pm
16th Dec 2017 9:25pm
Dammit. Dammit. Dammit.
While we ( feel ) we should've seen, now we know from the contrast of experience!
When you're my age, you recognize from having not when younger. Excellently penned, AtoMikOne.
📝💕
While we ( feel ) we should've seen, now we know from the contrast of experience!
When you're my age, you recognize from having not when younger. Excellently penned, AtoMikOne.
📝💕
16th Dec 2017 10:01pm
