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When lights go down
Dark lit Night
A lady homed at its presence
Her pale skin illuminates in the shadows
A slimmed figure
Fits a tight blackened dress
Waits on the bed with a glass of wine
Cold pale blue eyes piercing the man
Hair adapted in wilderness of midnight
All of her, diving him insane
He's slaved, to her lustful desires as he undress
She stares in gloried power
Watching her pupil slaved in seduction
Crawling for a taste of her crimson lips
She calmly puts her glass down
Slides off her dress
Reveal bare skin as it glow
When she commands
Like a good dog, he abides and pleasures
Wet trails from her neck down
Vibration of moans
Figure of mastered appeal
Feeds her pet's hunger
Brutal desire grows intense
In flames they arouse
Plunge for satisfaction
Once fire is stoke
It lasts till sunrise
A lady homed at its presence
Her pale skin illuminates in the shadows
A slimmed figure
Fits a tight blackened dress
Waits on the bed with a glass of wine
Cold pale blue eyes piercing the man
Hair adapted in wilderness of midnight
All of her, diving him insane
He's slaved, to her lustful desires as he undress
She stares in gloried power
Watching her pupil slaved in seduction
Crawling for a taste of her crimson lips
She calmly puts her glass down
Slides off her dress
Reveal bare skin as it glow
When she commands
Like a good dog, he abides and pleasures
Wet trails from her neck down
Vibration of moans
Figure of mastered appeal
Feeds her pet's hunger
Brutal desire grows intense
In flames they arouse
Plunge for satisfaction
Once fire is stoke
It lasts till sunrise
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Re. When lights go down
1st Dec 2017 2:28am
She had this man firmly under her control. I love the sizzling metaphors and how they ignited as this night unfolded. She played him like a pet with her erotic dominance. This is a steamy poem which lights my fire. ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. When lights go down
1st Dec 2017 2:33am
Thank you John. I am honored my first work had ignited a flame.
Greatly appreciated.
Greatly appreciated.
Re. When lights go down
1st Dec 2017 3:07am
Fiery, passionate words spilt onto the page in deliciously dark ink. Delightfully decadent
Welcome to DUP
Welcome to DUP
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Re: Re. When lights go down
1st Dec 2017 3:23am
Thank you, for the welcome and the praise on my first work.
I am grateful.
I am grateful.
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1st Dec 2017 4:25am
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1st Dec 2017 8:14am
Re. When lights go down
1st Dec 2017 5:01am
Filthy rich! I love it. Although, it is perfectly descriptive, the visualization of the setting and possibly even adding in clothing that's involved, I believe that would really set it off. Awesome, this is such great motivation for erotic beginners, like myself.
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1st Dec 2017 8:12am
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Re. When lights go down
Anonymous
1st Dec 2017 5:01pm
the food was fantastic and gosh darn it all... uh... excuse me... pretty darn good. yea! ... uh... super duper yea!
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2nd Dec 2017 00:29am
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Anonymous
2nd Dec 2017 2:41am
stitched a bit but over all the fast slow & extemely close is a good vault to lick long after the dog has forgot the reason for begging. sumptuously decadent would half added yet there are still scraps in my tight lips and bulging eyes
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Re. When lights go down
2nd Dec 2017 00:40am
Had me on the edge of my seat. Hot and steamy write. Brilliant. Welcome to DUP!
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3rd Dec 2017 3:09am
Re. When lights go down
10th Dec 2017 11:31am
Lasting all nights sounds like a wonderful dream...mmmmmm...such delicious visuals of a svelte hot body in n out of that dress lol
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