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His essence
Just the taste of your love,
so warm and so sweet,
the tenderness of your tongue,
as it shows passion to my neck,
what a desire you make me feel,
one of dancing love and irrefutable lust,
your body on mine,
there is nothing more that I crave,
your lips between my legs,
I yearn for vehemently,
you just within me,
a perfervid time,
for lust or for love,
I want you in a plethora sort of way.
so warm and so sweet,
the tenderness of your tongue,
as it shows passion to my neck,
what a desire you make me feel,
one of dancing love and irrefutable lust,
your body on mine,
there is nothing more that I crave,
your lips between my legs,
I yearn for vehemently,
you just within me,
a perfervid time,
for lust or for love,
I want you in a plethora sort of way.
Published 30th Nov 2017
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30th Nov 2017 9:03pm
I liked this poem. The feeling came across as real, and I could imagine her thinking all this. But then the phrase 'plethora sort of way" broke the spell for me, and made me think of the poet doing the writing.
30th Nov 2017 10:08pm
im glad you liked it, thank you and im sorry that the one part broke the feel for you
20th Dec 2017 11:02pm
