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Letting you go is my biggest sacrifice
Picture this
10 years later - we'll see each other
I'll say HI to you and
you'll say HI back to me
I'll ask how your life is
You'll tell me about your wife and kids and when you'll say these,
my heart will ache
Not b'coz I don't want you to settle down or be happy with someone else
But...
b'coz this is all I want !!!
10 years later - we'll see each other
I'll say HI to you and
you'll say HI back to me
I'll ask how your life is
You'll tell me about your wife and kids and when you'll say these,
my heart will ache
Not b'coz I don't want you to settle down or be happy with someone else
But...
b'coz this is all I want !!!
Published 27th Nov 2017
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Hello and welcome
decent offering you've offered. short but honest and with some substance. it's relatable
I dunno if you need the last couple of lines
"Not b'coz I don't want you to settle down or be happy with someone else
But...
b'coz this is all I want !!! "
people are astute enough, poets are super-astute
anyhow, enjoy your stay here
decent offering you've offered. short but honest and with some substance. it's relatable
I dunno if you need the last couple of lines
"Not b'coz I don't want you to settle down or be happy with someone else
But...
b'coz this is all I want !!! "
people are astute enough, poets are super-astute
anyhow, enjoy your stay here
30th Nov 2017 2:48pm
