Contortionists

“over forbidden lines & flagrant evidence pools in your eyes”

WOW

"Gathering slack in cracked baskets"-i'm going on a graveyard picnic in the next week because of you and this line

"the unholy unraveling      
of my festered form" -you just turned into a hydra that i have to fight...PREPARE TO BATTLE  lol

"my silken snakeskin plaits...      
shedded salacities abate "-one half of me imagines a flute player summoning a 40 ft snake from a basket for someone to climb up and the other half focuses on the "salacities" and how Americans should be a bit more open like Europeans with sexual adventures and being open with our erotic sides.

ideals are put on pedestals to be knocked off and built back up again to withstand the blow, but they all must adapt to survive...we must all live like the fittest

"& though I sit      
in chairs I've carved      
with hard-backed hedges      
I hold down my traversing      
hands...      
& the blood they shed      
beneath my transgressive thighs  "- we shall cross boundaries to see where we stand or fall under the bridges we built on false hopes and dreams


we are all immoral
writhing in the pits with our devious thoughts of betrayal,adultery aching in our minds
holding apples behind our lovers backs
feeding someone else's mind

manipulate me, but do it slowly so i can enjoy it.


lol

you've outdone yourself AtoMik, you put in the work on this and it paid off.

(throws a stack of $100 bills in the air like i'm at the club)

Thank you friend. This means so much, and I don't even have the time today to address it all.  I hope your day is carrying on splendidly.

Thank you, I put in time, but the sentiments were roiling at the surface, easy to access and pen. Too easy, truly.

Here I go again loving your work, reading it out loud then running for the dictionary - I like the way you make me work for it - really! - thank you you are forever increasing my vocabulary :-)))))))

The day a man actually THANKED me for letting my vocabulary soar was the day I heartily believed I would have a cold heart attack and drop dead.

You wouldn't believe how the world hates a well-versed woman. And you wouldn't believe how grateful I am for a judgement free outlet where us ladies are continually supported. SO much love for you gentlemen here 😊

"For most of history 'anonymous' was a woman." - Virginia Woolf

I was an asshole until I learned my most important lesson - to respect women and see them as equals - which was a good deal because in my head they were always better than us (lol)

Oh, you mean to say that you felt women were superior than your beliefs changed to equality?

Both genders are beautiful and critical <3

No I was brought up and educated to be a male shoving fist pig  so I learned they were inferior - Then I met a strong woman and she re-educated me to the truth. :-)

and I think that equality is a good deal for my gender as women appear to me as superior - that's why I am happy with equality :-))

Ahhh I see! All it takes is one strong one to cause a tectonic shift in perspective. I'm sorry you were raised so poorly 😔

That's very sweet! Sometimes I think society is attempting to overcorrect by asserting (often subtly) that women actually are superior. I personally believe it's just as damaging, and one suffers if the other is disregarded or underestimated. But I won't rant about it, it'd be a long stream if comments 😆

At any rate, thanks David!

I agree with you :-)))

equality in all things is the only thing that makes sense to me :-))