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The Tortured Minute
60 seconds ago...we finished making love...50 seconds ago...you stood up..40 seconds ago..you answered your phone...30 seconds ago...you stare at me and groan...
20 seconds ago...you told me the truth..that you were leaving me for her and that theres nothing i could do...10 seconds ago i threw on my clothes...5 seconds ago...i walked in front of a car...3 seconds ago I didn' t know who you are...2 seconds ago..angels eyes stared at me...1 second ago...I was in the hospital.
20 seconds ago...you told me the truth..that you were leaving me for her and that theres nothing i could do...10 seconds ago i threw on my clothes...5 seconds ago...i walked in front of a car...3 seconds ago I didn' t know who you are...2 seconds ago..angels eyes stared at me...1 second ago...I was in the hospital.
Published 22nd Nov 2017
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4th Dec 2017 1:02am
4th Dec 2017 11:51am
Thankyou. This is one of my shorter poems but also one of my hardest poems to write.
2nd Feb 2018 2:39pm
2nd Feb 2018 3:56pm
Thankyou baby. Relationships are hard and i try to relate to every kind of complicated relationship through my poetry
