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Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
You've seduced my mind
with poetic art
left me crazy in poetic madness-
Birthing hopes that seem unreal;
I'm lost;
I can't confine
silly thoughts afloat
Your intense words
unintentionally
leaving me in awe
What will you do now?
My heart
'tis in your hands
will you water this flower
or leave to wilt;
It yearns for sunshine
for daylight...
to grow
transform
blossom
spike
It seems
I've met my match
(maybe)
Forming unspeakable dreams
imagination pleads mercy
extending without limits
not a boundary seems to build
Is love just a cast of spell?
Or is it
a poison that kills?
leaving one never the same
Impossible un-doings
of its effects, it affects
tainting the clueless soul
not knowing of its harms
Yes,
being in love has its benefits, but
at a stupendous price
too costly to sell
too precious once bought
In a daze
a haze once fallen
Perplexed...
For there is no blueprint
or directions
no structure
to mold into its perfect form
What to do in these poetic illusions?
Falling in the pit of love;
would we plant a garden?
Or would I...
be left abandoned
with poetic art
left me crazy in poetic madness-
Birthing hopes that seem unreal;
I'm lost;
I can't confine
silly thoughts afloat
Your intense words
unintentionally
leaving me in awe
What will you do now?
My heart
'tis in your hands
will you water this flower
or leave to wilt;
It yearns for sunshine
for daylight...
to grow
transform
blossom
spike
It seems
I've met my match
(maybe)
Forming unspeakable dreams
imagination pleads mercy
extending without limits
not a boundary seems to build
Is love just a cast of spell?
Or is it
a poison that kills?
leaving one never the same
Impossible un-doings
of its effects, it affects
tainting the clueless soul
not knowing of its harms
Yes,
being in love has its benefits, but
at a stupendous price
too costly to sell
too precious once bought
In a daze
a haze once fallen
Perplexed...
For there is no blueprint
or directions
no structure
to mold into its perfect form
What to do in these poetic illusions?
Falling in the pit of love;
would we plant a garden?
Or would I...
be left abandoned
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 19th Nov 2017
| Edited 20th Nov 2017
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Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 3:47am
I think this is a wonderful allegory of love's ability to manifest itself in so many ways and the ability of intelligent minds to partake in its complex game... One of your best!
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 3:52am
Thank you so much..!
Your words mean so well...
I fairly, appreciate your wonderful comments,
and hope to bring you much more "best works" :)
Love,
-H-
Your words mean so well...
I fairly, appreciate your wonderful comments,
and hope to bring you much more "best works" :)
Love,
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 7:32am
like I said...you continue to bless us with your pure soul laid bear...we are blessed
much love
-Jeff
much love
-Jeff
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 7:52am
hmm...
how do we know if a pure soul is laid in works?
All I did is simply find words to express my thoughts and heart in my works.. isn't that what poetry is about..?
But as always, thank you,
for your such kind words that always encourages me in what I do...
Your time and commenting,
greatly appreciated,
with love,
-H-
how do we know if a pure soul is laid in works?
All I did is simply find words to express my thoughts and heart in my works.. isn't that what poetry is about..?
But as always, thank you,
for your such kind words that always encourages me in what I do...
Your time and commenting,
greatly appreciated,
with love,
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 1:02pm
you are sunshine and daylight.
even with love, nothing ventured nothing gained.
even with love, nothing ventured nothing gained.
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 4:04pm
Your simple yet deep response are greatly appreciated, Prometheus...!
Love is a interesting feeling...
Thank you,
again, for your time and comments..
-H-
Love is a interesting feeling...
Thank you,
again, for your time and comments..
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
Anonymous
19th Nov 2017 6:06pm
You write very beautifully. I absolutely love the last four lines. Thank you for sharing :-)

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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 6:48pm
Thank you so much for your lovely comment star..! :)
I appreciate your time and reads..
Love,
-H-
I appreciate your time and reads..
Love,
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 10:05pm
you always take me away to a different place when i read your ink beautifully written :)
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
19th Nov 2017 10:11pm
Thank you so much, Epic..! :)
I greatly appreciate your beautiful comment to my work...!
and your time, as well dear poet...
Love,
-H-
I greatly appreciate your beautiful comment to my work...!
and your time, as well dear poet...
Love,
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
Anonymous
20th Nov 2017 1:14am
I can feel this one H... beautifully captured :)

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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
20th Nov 2017 1:29am
Thank you so much sophie..!
Your comments, and reads are always appreciated :)
Love,
-H-
Your comments, and reads are always appreciated :)
Love,
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
21st Nov 2017 2:38am
another Wow moment and another fantastic ink beautifully crafted the questions we have in our minds about love :-)))
"will you water this flower
or leave to wilt;" - - - - - - - - - Beautiful :-)))))
"will you water this flower
or leave to wilt;" - - - - - - - - - Beautiful :-)))))
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
21st Nov 2017 2:45am
Your compliments means such a great deal to me..!
again, I am shocked by your wonderful comment, and presence in my work...!
Thank you so much, I greatly respect your works, and I shall strive, thrive and improve..
again, thank you:))
respects,
-H-
again, I am shocked by your wonderful comment, and presence in my work...!
Thank you so much, I greatly respect your works, and I shall strive, thrive and improve..
again, thank you:))
respects,
-H-
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
24th Nov 2017 10:13am
God...firstly I'm ashamed to have missed so many inks in so short a time, secondly...Jesus, this is an absolute GEM!! very proud of u lady :)
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
24th Nov 2017 10:41am
Well...what can I say...I am a young poetess yet to mature in her works....I've been experimenting and hope to bring more treasure to your mind's eyes and sugar to your sweetooth.. :)
Thanks poetikness!
Your support always appreciated indeed...
Love
H
Thanks poetikness!
Your support always appreciated indeed...
Love
H
Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
10th Dec 2017 6:13pm
this felt quite long. i like how the phrase "spells, flowers , n' madness" seems to summarize the piece quite well.
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Re: Re. Confessions of Poetic Love (spells, flowers , n' madness)
10th Dec 2017 10:02pm
Yes, I understand, but
I thought if I made it long, that it'd attract more readers and "confessions of poetic love" part was for my declaration for someone...
I thought if I made it long, that it'd attract more readers and "confessions of poetic love" part was for my declaration for someone...