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Moonlessness
No moon this night
a sterile lunar womb wheels
dispirited & cloaked
dreams dance beyond
depleted cosmos
Crepuscular cycles
verge
emerging again in a crescent
slice
bleached clipped fingernail
shaving
A haven
where nuclear notions
breed again
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One goal of mine was to employ 'crepuscular' in my poetic life. 🙃✔
Published 18th Nov 2017
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18th Nov 2017 8:23pm
crepuscular, now there's a cool word I never heard before. I might just have to steal that from you now that you brought it to my attention. A most fitting word for DUP!
Loved the lunar imagery!
Excellent ink!!!
JJ
Loved the lunar imagery!
Excellent ink!!!
JJ
18th Nov 2017 8:42pm
19th Nov 2017 1:52am
You did it quite beautifully! I always refer to the crescent as " The thumbnail of God ". 🌒
19th Nov 2017 2:32am
I love that! :)
Do you ever wonder how many people write about the moon?...lol
Do you ever wonder how many people write about the moon?...lol
19th Nov 2017 8:02pm
I had never heard of that word "verge" but I use 'crepuscular' all the time (lol)
as always your poem has real beauty and also serves to educate :-)))
Excellent Ink - Loved it :-))))))
as always your poem has real beauty and also serves to educate :-)))
Excellent Ink - Loved it :-))))))
19th Nov 2017 10:25pm
It's a bitchin word! My language is verbose and usual, quickly turning into profanity and swearing. We'd really get along dude.
This might be why I don't have a lot of friends offline though 😆 people like us confound and shock others!
This might be why I don't have a lot of friends offline though 😆 people like us confound and shock others!
19th Nov 2017 10:36pm
Yeah I can count the number of friends I have in the real world on one hand with no fingers - the real world sucks :-)
