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Hiding In The Clouds
Watching from above, they say It sees it all
It sees me from the sky,its hiding in the clouds
My eyes may not see It but they say Its all around
I don't belive a word of it, they say I'll burn in hell
I tell you that It can't exist, isn't it plain to see??
You say I must have faith in something to believe
Its hiding up amongst the clouds but Its just not real to me...
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
It sees me from the sky,its hiding in the clouds
My eyes may not see It but they say Its all around
I don't belive a word of it, they say I'll burn in hell
I tell you that It can't exist, isn't it plain to see??
You say I must have faith in something to believe
Its hiding up amongst the clouds but Its just not real to me...
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
Published 18th Sep 2011
| Edited 17th Mar 2012
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19th Sep 2011 1:36am
I really like this, and I wanted to know if you would allow me to use it for one of my school assignments?
19th Sep 2011 1:48am
yea sure you can just give refference to me as needed. Thanks for asking me and for the compliment :)
19th Sep 2011 4:45am
Any time! :D I'm glad I could be of assistance to you. Thanks for the free publicity haha I always love getting my stuff out for others to see so its nice to know someone appreciates it enough that they want others to see it as well
21st Sep 2011 5:53pm
22nd Sep 2011 4:18am
are you asking me or simply stating?
and to clarify I do not believe in hell... I'm not a religeous man but I'm also not an atheist... I loosly believe in the possibility of some sort of extra dimensional being but nothing so blind as to say "god" or a "lord" but I do believe in spiritual energy and the energy of the universe... Though I don't really know what you'd call that
and to clarify I do not believe in hell... I'm not a religeous man but I'm also not an atheist... I loosly believe in the possibility of some sort of extra dimensional being but nothing so blind as to say "god" or a "lord" but I do believe in spiritual energy and the energy of the universe... Though I don't really know what you'd call that
24th Jan 2012 9:34am
Some people have to see to believe, some people have faith. You expressed well that you are the type that has to see to believe, as many are. I myself am not sure what to believe :p. Anyway, nice work :)
I'm with you there.
I don' know what to believe exactly but I'd rather not put faith into a maybe... I figure I'm better off disbelieving untill proven otherwise cause if worst comes to worst I'll just say I'm sorry :P what's he (it) could do? Smite me??
I don' know what to believe exactly but I'd rather not put faith into a maybe... I figure I'm better off disbelieving untill proven otherwise cause if worst comes to worst I'll just say I'm sorry :P what's he (it) could do? Smite me??
