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So Emotional...
I get
so emotional
Everytime
I think life...
WHY
the riddle?
Stuck in the
middle, btwixt
fortune n' pain...
Caught
in 'the trap' in
this insufferable game...
Loosely insane
probably a defines
'My Sane...'
So lost...for the
want of found
Too confined by
the standards
within societal binds
So the tumultuous
storms rage, across
the range of an
emotional mind...
Ever searchin'
to solve the riddle
of what the fuck
is happening
to Man n' mine...
I get so emotional
everytime I seek
reason or rhyme
on where do
I fit...
in these
ass crazy times...
so emotional
Everytime
I think life...
WHY
the riddle?
Stuck in the
middle, btwixt
fortune n' pain...
Caught
in 'the trap' in
this insufferable game...
Loosely insane
probably a defines
'My Sane...'
So lost...for the
want of found
Too confined by
the standards
within societal binds
So the tumultuous
storms rage, across
the range of an
emotional mind...
Ever searchin'
to solve the riddle
of what the fuck
is happening
to Man n' mine...
I get so emotional
everytime I seek
reason or rhyme
on where do
I fit...
in these
ass crazy times...
Published 12th Nov 2017
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12th Nov 2017 11:53am
Nice flowing, probing write ... hope you find all the answers you seek my sweet poet
12th Nov 2017 11:58am
Funny thing about life
No one has all the answers
n I truly doubt anyone ever will...
Still, appreciate you deeply n always...
No one has all the answers
n I truly doubt anyone ever will...
Still, appreciate you deeply n always...
12th Nov 2017 12:59pm
I, too, liked its rhythm and melody... As for the questions, keep questioning, Poe, keep being a poet.
12th Nov 2017 1:12pm
I can promise you this bro. From the beginning I've felt a need to spill, n as long as it is present, I will continue... thanks so much, I'm grateful as always :)
Anonymous
12th Nov 2017 2:16pm
'on where do
I fit...
in these
ass crazy times...'
nahh bro
you were born to stand out
the outstanding never fits in
hence the journey of the poet
I fit...
in these
ass crazy times...'
nahh bro
you were born to stand out
the outstanding never fits in
hence the journey of the poet
12th Nov 2017 3:05pm
My dear brother...that is a wonderful thing to say, but then again you're just as outstanding...truly, greatly appreciate you kid...thank u!
12th Nov 2017 2:39pm
12th Nov 2017 3:12pm
12th Nov 2017 8:34pm
This poem connects so deeply to my heart dear poet...
Don't we all get a little lost in life at times?
Seeking answers, questioning and reasoning..
for there are multiple answers in life...
and truly, not all questions are bound to be found...
Seems like a simple thought that popped in your mind,
but it's well done...
very admirable
-H-
Don't we all get a little lost in life at times?
Seeking answers, questioning and reasoning..
for there are multiple answers in life...
and truly, not all questions are bound to be found...
Seems like a simple thought that popped in your mind,
but it's well done...
very admirable
-H-
12th Nov 2017 8:46pm
It was indeed a thought n then it wrote itself... I thank you sweetheart for your thoughts n support... :)
12th Nov 2017 8:35pm
I'm feeling this bro and can also relate. During these times where it appears that as a society we are regressing instead of progressing when it comes to race relations. Keep doing your thing with the pen bruh.
12th Nov 2017 8:50pm
Thank you bro. I kinda have no choice
the voices inside push me to ink on...appreciate u tons...
the voices inside push me to ink on...appreciate u tons...
12th Nov 2017 8:42pm
"So lost...for the
want of found "
I feel ya, this whole poem. Great ink!
want of found "
I feel ya, this whole poem. Great ink!
12th Nov 2017 9:37pm
12th Nov 2017 10:45pm
Certainly can relate to this feeling of what the fuck is going on in the world and how does it all, and where do I, fit in. So much to ponder here.
12th Nov 2017 11:02pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 00:01am
Yup, tired of trying to find answers - just go with it lol
13th Nov 2017 00:07am
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 1:13am
Hell yeah! Sweet ass poetry my dear.
13th Nov 2017 1:40am
14th Nov 2017 11:43pm
"So lost for the want of found" I love it. Its so relatable for me. I relate to this line in particular when it comes to love. Its confusing and I am lost. I want to be found..in the way of love.
15th Nov 2017 1:02am
I'm sad to hear that sweetheart... hope you get what you want soon :)... thanks for the
support on this...truly grateful...
support on this...truly grateful...
2nd Dec 2017 1:11pm
2nd Dec 2017 1:39pm
Really relate to this one. In fact, this is my favorite poem by you. Nice flow and written beautifully.
"So lost...for the
want of found"
Love that line!
"So lost...for the
want of found"
Love that line!
7th Dec 2017 10:22pm
I don't doubt you find this as a favorite, but truly, there are about 699 other pieces,
sooooo u may wanna revise that a Lil bit lol...JK... I thank you greatly my dear, very kind of u... :)
sooooo u may wanna revise that a Lil bit lol...JK... I thank you greatly my dear, very kind of u... :)
7th Dec 2017 10:26pm
