No Season for Love

Standing at a corner
in season of frost
anything that passes by
will surely be coldness called... Love your little haiku aphorisms!

And I love your words, takis, which remind me of a fairy tale that made me cry as often as I read it as a little girl (The Little Match Girl by Hans Christian Andersen). Thank you so much for your comment! I feel honored.

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Thank you, Speak :-). Ever grateful for honest words. Those 5-7-5 are always a challenge ...

So now "Bob" will forever be synonymous with cold..just great! Ha ha, kidding. I love this piece for its contrasting feelings projected. Brava!

Thanks a lot G_W :-). Love your comment!

i really like the line
"Coldness bears your name "
and imagery painted in just 3 lines.well written Chiyo

Thank you vey much for your comment, samael. I agree, the third line sounds quite nice :-).