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Vomitous Rue
So the epilogue is late
if ever it comes
We ache from the bone outward
but never our marrow
never our sacred
We press to the unattainable gray
black against white.
White-
stark-
naked among gloom
The hedge...
cutting us in form
we despise our lines
And that thriving we chase
that easy...silky gray...
A blighted dream
a never-birthed craving
***
An older poem of mine I'm finally submitting here. From 2015.
if ever it comes
We ache from the bone outward
but never our marrow
never our sacred
We press to the unattainable gray
black against white.
White-
stark-
naked among gloom
The hedge...
cutting us in form
we despise our lines
And that thriving we chase
that easy...silky gray...
A blighted dream
a never-birthed craving
***
An older poem of mine I'm finally submitting here. From 2015.
Published 6th Nov 2017
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6th Nov 2017 8:00am
love this:
"We press to the unattainable gray
black against white.
White-
stark-
naked among gloom"
much enjoyed
"We press to the unattainable gray
black against white.
White-
stark-
naked among gloom"
much enjoyed
6th Nov 2017 8:10am
6th Nov 2017 8:16am
Anonymous
7th Nov 2017 2:59am
beautiful
7th Nov 2017 5:56pm
the first and last line sell me a dreamer and put me on the street corner to make a dime, i love it lol.
" So the epilogue is late
if ever it comes"
"A blighted dream
a never-birthed craving "
my mind keeps pouring over "blighted dream" and the imagery and ideas pushing are perfect.
fantastic lines AtoMikbomb
" So the epilogue is late
if ever it comes"
"A blighted dream
a never-birthed craving "
my mind keeps pouring over "blighted dream" and the imagery and ideas pushing are perfect.
fantastic lines AtoMikbomb
7th Nov 2017 9:44pm
9th Nov 2017 00:36am
another masterful right - I always love reading your poetry :-)))))
superb ink :-)
superb ink :-)
9th Nov 2017 00:43am
