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From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
She was a fairy, of brilliant mind
A rare find, of such kind..
Untainted;
delicate and pure
Unstained;
in her white cloth
She coveted for true love,
a "perfect romance"
Thought she met the one,
the "only one..."
But
Now...
She's alone,
there's not a place in a heart to call her own
Trashed and Bashed
deserted and disowned
By once a man, called her lover...
Her angelic smile has left her lips
Her body is left filthy, in cum-
discharged from that scum...
Blackened with ashes from her heart,
she lost sight of her beginnings..
Left thirsty of once her possession;
thoughts of slutty desire
Now
She is....
A diabolic whore calling for lascivious acts,
Smothered in vindictive itch,
Her soul still yearns...
Hanker for demolishing butchery,
of her feminine fragility
To be fed with a spoonful,
of woeful false affection
Her longing...?
To be trashed and crashed;
with that damned cock
Mocked and cocked right through with all might
What a pitiful soul
Her angels left and had fallen
Never shall she be able to go back
A rare find, of such kind..
Untainted;
delicate and pure
Unstained;
in her white cloth
She coveted for true love,
a "perfect romance"
Thought she met the one,
the "only one..."
But
Now...
She's alone,
there's not a place in a heart to call her own
Trashed and Bashed
deserted and disowned
By once a man, called her lover...
Her angelic smile has left her lips
Her body is left filthy, in cum-
discharged from that scum...
Blackened with ashes from her heart,
she lost sight of her beginnings..
Left thirsty of once her possession;
thoughts of slutty desire
Now
She is....
A diabolic whore calling for lascivious acts,
Smothered in vindictive itch,
Her soul still yearns...
Hanker for demolishing butchery,
of her feminine fragility
To be fed with a spoonful,
of woeful false affection
Her longing...?
To be trashed and crashed;
with that damned cock
Mocked and cocked right through with all might
What a pitiful soul
Her angels left and had fallen
Never shall she be able to go back
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 3rd Nov 2017
| Edited 24th Nov 2017
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Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:08am
Whoa...this was raw, n I dare say...hot, yea not the grandest light shining I. This heat but it def. Has heat... impressed!!
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:17am
Awwe! Thank you..!
I wasn't quite sure where to put the category of this "poem" lol
I wanted to put a sense of erotic sense, but it was still a story of love....
glad you got a heat though! :)
-H-
I wasn't quite sure where to put the category of this "poem" lol
I wanted to put a sense of erotic sense, but it was still a story of love....
glad you got a heat though! :)
-H-
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:34am
such a curve in the road...woman...I had to grab the wheel from grandpa...I loved the twist...and the "Hanker for demolishing butchery,"...is my favorite line of the day...splendid write my passionate friend...much love-J
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:43am
Haha, I am glad you have enjoyed this write...! I was quite anxious, but your comment had left me with a sigh of relief..!:)
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your reading list entry and support...!
-H-
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your reading list entry and support...!
-H-
Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:54am
don't even bother pushing the anxious button...you can write as you please here...it is encouraged-kisses-Jeff
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:58am
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:39am
Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 4:46am
Yes, lol hopefully she'll find her way out someway,
be it over or under...!
Haha, thank you for your comments
:)
-H-
be it over or under...!
Haha, thank you for your comments
:)
-H-
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
beautiful poetess
sounds like a deep hurt
& this lady took back her power
by embracing her darkness..
"A diabolic whore calling for lascivious acts,
Smothered in vindictive itch,
Her soul still yearns... "
wickedly awesome write..
love Crim
sounds like a deep hurt
& this lady took back her power
by embracing her darkness..
"A diabolic whore calling for lascivious acts,
Smothered in vindictive itch,
Her soul still yearns... "
wickedly awesome write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 8:37pm
Thank you so much fellow poetess...!
Yes, it was a very deep cut in her soul, and a piece of her precious heart was taken away....
But she kept her posture and just became one with the hurt...
I really, really appreciate and love your wonderful visits to my lil' workshop :)
-H-
Yes, it was a very deep cut in her soul, and a piece of her precious heart was taken away....
But she kept her posture and just became one with the hurt...
I really, really appreciate and love your wonderful visits to my lil' workshop :)
-H-
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 6:53pm
unholy hell this is fantastic!
so vivid & alive in its powerful contrasts
from so pure & innocent..
"She was a fairy, of brilliant mind
A rare find, of such kind..
Untainted;
delicate and pure
Unstained;"
to sex demoness with all the power..
"Her longing...?
To be trashed and crashed;
with that damned cock...
Mocked and cocked right through with all might..."
damn it you got down on this write..
~Raven
so vivid & alive in its powerful contrasts
from so pure & innocent..
"She was a fairy, of brilliant mind
A rare find, of such kind..
Untainted;
delicate and pure
Unstained;"
to sex demoness with all the power..
"Her longing...?
To be trashed and crashed;
with that damned cock...
Mocked and cocked right through with all might..."
damn it you got down on this write..
~Raven
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
3rd Nov 2017 8:43pm
Thank you so much! :)
I've always had an obsession over twists and turns of things when seemingly innocent creatures transforms into a lovely devil..!
I am so pleased you seem to have enjoyed it..! :)
Thank you again, for your reading list and comments,
wonderful visits always makes my day..
-H-
I've always had an obsession over twists and turns of things when seemingly innocent creatures transforms into a lovely devil..!
I am so pleased you seem to have enjoyed it..! :)
Thank you again, for your reading list and comments,
wonderful visits always makes my day..
-H-
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
4th Nov 2017 3:37am
With powerful imagery you painted a fallen angel and even if her wings are broken, her walk burns open paths with every step she takes. Loved it!
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
4th Nov 2017 11:08pm
Thank you so much..!
yes, Angels can still be quite alluring even if they fall..
I am glad to have brought visions to you with my work..! Really appreciate your comments and support..:)
-H-
yes, Angels can still be quite alluring even if they fall..
I am glad to have brought visions to you with my work..! Really appreciate your comments and support..:)
-H-
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
5th Nov 2017 5:42am
Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
5th Nov 2017 7:29am
Thank you so much..! :)
Transformation of such things and forever staing the pure ihas always been quite an interesting theme to me...
really appreciate your comments!
Transformation of such things and forever staing the pure ihas always been quite an interesting theme to me...
really appreciate your comments!
Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
11th Nov 2017 6:07pm
oh i like it.it's rough in a pleasant way and i come out feeling like i've been the "Lover" before.well written SourMelon0313
those last 2 lines close it out perfectly
"Her angels left and had fallen.. Never shall she be able to go back ".
those last 2 lines close it out perfectly
"Her angels left and had fallen.. Never shall she be able to go back ".
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Re: Re. From Angelic Damsel to Demonic Criminal
12th Nov 2017 8:19pm
Thank you so graciously kind samael!
I appreciate your kind comment and taking your time to read my works..!
-H-
I appreciate your kind comment and taking your time to read my works..!
-H-