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A NEEDED COMPANION
Cold becomes friend.
And breezes along beside me.
We're following strides-
Watching you all hiding.
I crave to know...
Why do they go?
Then I hear that hum and realize it's just the moon...
Cold becomes friend-
Whistling along beside me.
And breezes along beside me.
We're following strides-
Watching you all hiding.
I crave to know...
Why do they go?
Then I hear that hum and realize it's just the moon...
Cold becomes friend-
Whistling along beside me.
Published 31st Oct 2017
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My friend...i cannot help but sense a subtle, double meaning to this one. It is sad, and bitter -sweet, how only the cold, and breeze, offer the warmth of companionship to the poet.....as those who would be considered friends have departed...
You create a scene that becomes so visible to my mind's eye. The pain of loneliness is palpable throughout.I just wanted to go after the person...tell them to stop and wait...that i would offer my friendship....
A Most Memorable Moment....poetically portrayed!
You create a scene that becomes so visible to my mind's eye. The pain of loneliness is palpable throughout.I just wanted to go after the person...tell them to stop and wait...that i would offer my friendship....
A Most Memorable Moment....poetically portrayed!
