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Secret Place (2)
there's a secret place
which no one knows
it's in my mind
it grows and grows
it's filled with love
and pleasure streams
and radiant
with sparkling beams
all the beings
I meet there
are all the beings
everywhere
in all the places
all around
the secret place
is in this sound
rhyme and rhythm
and the sweet
synchronizing
as we meet
it's in my mind
it grows and grows
the secret place
which no one knows
which no one knows
it's in my mind
it grows and grows
it's filled with love
and pleasure streams
and radiant
with sparkling beams
all the beings
I meet there
are all the beings
everywhere
in all the places
all around
the secret place
is in this sound
rhyme and rhythm
and the sweet
synchronizing
as we meet
it's in my mind
it grows and grows
the secret place
which no one knows
Published 26th Oct 2017
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26th Oct 2017 7:11pm
Another beauty bc. Smooth flow and Great rhyming. Makes me want to join you there
26th Oct 2017 7:44pm
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27th Oct 2017 5:36pm
Hard to find a peom that gives me peace when I read, but this is the one. I can feel the solace from the words and phrases, and through the video I can smell the grass and woods. Especially your voice is gentle and tender..... hmmm just very nice in the whole package.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
27th Oct 2017 6:38pm
Thank you for your comment...we're all in this together..creating pleasant moments seems the right thing to do...you've now created such a moment for me
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