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Your sticks and stones may break my bones, but my fucking words will poison you, rip your soul apart and open you, until theres no form of hope in you, now youre just another hopeless fool. Walking aimlessly amongst the ashes, watch the pheonix rise in black flames immortalize the blazing pain, not even death could help you maintaing, so only darkness remains.
Published 15th Sep 2011
| Edited 16th Sep 2011
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16th Sep 2011 8:23am
It's short, but it flows nicely especially in the beginning. I like the opening line too, and I can feel the emotion. But I think on the last line you meant to put 'maintain' and not 'mainting'.
16th Sep 2011 6:36pm
Thanks..youre right..now that i look at it i also misspelled amongst xD
