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Who Ever Thought?
Who ever thought, your first love would be your last?
The days just get shorter, time goes by too fast.
What would one do, if you gave them your heart?
Now you feel lost, it has all fallen apart.
You try to let it go, but it doesn’t work that way.
The more I try not to feel, hurts worse and worse each day.
I have an empty hole, where my heart used to be.
Now I have no feelings, just my dignity.
Everything you wanted has already gone and passed.
Who ever thought, your first love would be your last?
The days just get shorter, time goes by too fast.
What would one do, if you gave them your heart?
Now you feel lost, it has all fallen apart.
You try to let it go, but it doesn’t work that way.
The more I try not to feel, hurts worse and worse each day.
I have an empty hole, where my heart used to be.
Now I have no feelings, just my dignity.
Everything you wanted has already gone and passed.
Who ever thought, your first love would be your last?
Published 15th Sep 2011
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13th Jan 2012 1:48am
give me beat! i need a beat! liked the word use, understood the theme, couldn't hold the beat. some of the phrases could be broken down a lil different to attain a softer balance. as a suggestion for example...
Everything you wanted
has already gone passed
Who ever thought your first love
would be your last?
Again; this is only my vibe... not the way it is Thank you for sharing! Respect
Everything you wanted
has already gone passed
Who ever thought your first love
would be your last?
Again; this is only my vibe... not the way it is Thank you for sharing! Respect
