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Don't Tell
empty walls
forgotten spaces crowded allies
foul smelling
hush up,
don't tell
what's seen
you've heard
the screams
cover ears
closed eyes
silenced mouth
walk away
head down
don't look
all around
pleading whispers
silent screams
hopeless whimpers
violated dreams
once young
now old
was new
quickly used
don't tell
what's seen
within the
foul smelling
cover ears
crowded allies
walk away
forgotten spaces
don't look
empty walls
don't tell
forgotten spaces crowded allies
foul smelling
hush up,
don't tell
what's seen
you've heard
the screams
cover ears
closed eyes
silenced mouth
walk away
head down
don't look
all around
pleading whispers
silent screams
hopeless whimpers
violated dreams
once young
now old
was new
quickly used
don't tell
what's seen
within the
foul smelling
cover ears
crowded allies
walk away
forgotten spaces
don't look
empty walls
don't tell
Published 16th Oct 2017
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16th Oct 2017 5:37pm
This poem helped me get a feel for the way my sister views certain situations. She's a schizophrenic and hates crowds. I really enjoy the way that each line was short, helping to set the mood, and the level of repetition you used to give the poem theme.
8th Nov 2018 00:23am
Hey, I know this way late, but I haven't been on for a long time so I'm just now seeing what you wrote. I'm glad it help you see things the way your sister might. Thank you for your kind words, I appritiate them.
