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Half Cooked Bacon..
The air fills with the greasy smell of bacon;
starving, my stomach growls desperately
Smoky sweet,
a salty treat!
I wait impatiently as it sizzles in the pan
Mouth is watering ;
I swallow my hunger as I stare at the crisping meat
Nerves beyond control;
I take the bacon out half-cooked
Man...I should've waited longer..!
starving, my stomach growls desperately
Smoky sweet,
a salty treat!
I wait impatiently as it sizzles in the pan
Mouth is watering ;
I swallow my hunger as I stare at the crisping meat
Nerves beyond control;
I take the bacon out half-cooked
Man...I should've waited longer..!
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Re. Half Cooked Bacon..
16th Oct 2017 3:05am
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16th Oct 2017 3:15am
Re. Half Cooked Bacon..
16th Oct 2017 1:40pm
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16th Oct 2017 10:21pm
It's the magic of the bacon! lol thank you so much for your reads! I really appreciate it..! :)
Re. Half Cooked Bacon..
16th Oct 2017 11:30pm
We are always too early...or too damn late...and there is nothing worse than too late...great write.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. Half Cooked Bacon..
16th Oct 2017 11:44pm
Thank you so much..! Sometimes our impatience gets the best of us , and at times way too sluggish of things...
Re. Half Cooked Bacon..
17th Oct 2017 3:18am
It wouldn't tempt me in the least...I hate pork...but I admit it has a nice aroma lol
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Re: Re. Half Cooked Bacon..
17th Oct 2017 3:26am
I only like pork when it is cooked right- lol thank you always for your support o one..! Y'know I appreciate it..! and have you ever heard of the saying that: "bacon is the perfume for the guys?" lol
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17th Oct 2017 4:06am
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