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When I rest
From the journey
I will rest with the greats
Tell stories
Of triumph and loss
Talk about the old ways
Forgotten
As we laugh
Knowing that we have paid
The final cost
When I rest
I won't bother anyone
For love
Or grief
I won't bring any misery
I won't hurt
There will be peace
I am sure things will go on
Old friends and enemies
Helpers and abusers
All, will forget about me
I will rest
No more heavy load
Problems gone instantly
I will sleep a deep sleep
With all of the greatness once possessed
No more will they lay upon my chest
No more tests
When I rest
I will rest with the greats
Tell stories
Of triumph and loss
Talk about the old ways
Forgotten
As we laugh
Knowing that we have paid
The final cost
When I rest
I won't bother anyone
For love
Or grief
I won't bring any misery
I won't hurt
There will be peace
I am sure things will go on
Old friends and enemies
Helpers and abusers
All, will forget about me
I will rest
No more heavy load
Problems gone instantly
I will sleep a deep sleep
With all of the greatness once possessed
No more will they lay upon my chest
No more tests
When I rest
Published 13th Oct 2017
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16th Oct 2017 5:33pm
and what a story poem it is...
this evoked emotions
of sadness
work..will remain though
rest it will not.
reminded
of days...yearning for the
one final
sleep.
job.
ink.
excellent.
this evoked emotions
of sadness
work..will remain though
rest it will not.
reminded
of days...yearning for the
one final
sleep.
job.
ink.
excellent.
18th Oct 2017 5:55pm
18th Oct 2017 5:55pm
7th Nov 2017 9:51pm
16th Oct 2017 11:47pm
Elegiac
To stand between triumph and loss and weigh them the same - is the only freedom
To stand between triumph and loss and weigh them the same - is the only freedom
7th Nov 2017 9:52pm
Anonymous
17th Oct 2017 4:38pm
It sounds so ..... peaceful. Something I yearn for right now. Thank you for expressing it so well.
7th Nov 2017 9:53pm
