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I Give My All
the easy things
are not so simple
what has me surviving
pulls me away from home
I don’t like knowing
this place without you
but here I am
fighting for another man’s dreams
wondering why I ever left
It just wasn’t my intent
while climbing mountains
I keep falling down
to hold your loving heart
I give my
give my fucking all!
temptation is a chemical
our love is so much more magical
I say I’m a man
but that takes work
doesn’t it?
I’m always trying to stay aware
of what’s forever
and what’s just passing
when these times get hard
I know truth will always stick around
while seeking heaven
I crawl through hell
to hold your loving heart
I give my
give my fucking all!
everything ends
In such tragic ways
I don’t understand
why do we try so hard
just to see it all burn to the ground
Is this life?
hopefully not for us
I can’t accept that
reality is what you make it
and I will make it
even if it takes my fucking all
are not so simple
what has me surviving
pulls me away from home
I don’t like knowing
this place without you
but here I am
fighting for another man’s dreams
wondering why I ever left
It just wasn’t my intent
while climbing mountains
I keep falling down
to hold your loving heart
I give my
give my fucking all!
temptation is a chemical
our love is so much more magical
I say I’m a man
but that takes work
doesn’t it?
I’m always trying to stay aware
of what’s forever
and what’s just passing
when these times get hard
I know truth will always stick around
while seeking heaven
I crawl through hell
to hold your loving heart
I give my
give my fucking all!
everything ends
In such tragic ways
I don’t understand
why do we try so hard
just to see it all burn to the ground
Is this life?
hopefully not for us
I can’t accept that
reality is what you make it
and I will make it
even if it takes my fucking all
Published 12th Oct 2017
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12th Oct 2017 12:20pm
this is true love giving your all
for the one who has your heart..
a rare beauty..
love Crim
for the one who has your heart..
a rare beauty..
love Crim
17th Oct 2017 8:10am
To hold on to love you have to be willing to go through hell with that person. Thanks for reading my poem 🤗
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 2:06pm
Giving our all is what makes it so much more precious, so much more durable. This is beautiful
17th Oct 2017 8:11am
15th Oct 2017 4:14am
So beautiful and lyrical... it's playing in my head like sentimental, emotional song :) Thank you so much for sharing and have a wonderful day :)
17th Oct 2017 8:13am
When writing it I was thinking of it being an emotional song. Something that has power behind the words. Thanks so much for enjoying 🤗
Anonymous
16th Oct 2017 5:08am
i felt this one on may too heavy on my heart.
17th Oct 2017 8:14am
