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I'll help you out
i'll help you out
i wont let you drown
from within
i'll help you back
to these muddy shores
for your heaven
is to far to swim
i'll help you out
i wont let you drown
from within
i'll help you back
to these muddy shores
for your heaven
is to far to swim
Published 14th Sep 2011
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21st Oct 2011 5:36am
Absolutely beautiful. Flow is incredibly smooth and with your simple wording you still create such a vivid scene. Love it!
21st Oct 2011 3:51pm
7th Nov 2013 7:00pm
The rhyme and rhythm of this is so smooth and unique. It offers the vibe of being saved, and I think for most this would bring a barrier of comfort.
8th Nov 2013 5:46am
from the bottom of an old mans hart thank you for reading and understanding the meaning
