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Scarlet Sunrise
The inner light with which her warm soul glows
Explodes above her eyes like a blooming red rose
Dancing 'til dawn under a sky full of radiant stars
On a world of ginger and spice known to Aries as Mars
Lovely to see along-side the morning surprise
But no sailors need warn of her scarlet sunrise
This phoenix will never meet with a fiery demise
For this shooting star will always continue to rise
Gravity will fail to make her shower transform to rain
Then I saw fire in her eyes I cannot begin to explain
Now she lifts my spirit to fly on a new astral plane
After I fell I thought surely I'd never rise up again
I had not realized her poem spilled out of my pen
Until she sang with the voice of an angel in Zen
Perhaps she has grown from a garden lost in the snow
To remind me paradise is here so there's no need to go
Explodes above her eyes like a blooming red rose
Dancing 'til dawn under a sky full of radiant stars
On a world of ginger and spice known to Aries as Mars
Lovely to see along-side the morning surprise
But no sailors need warn of her scarlet sunrise
This phoenix will never meet with a fiery demise
For this shooting star will always continue to rise
Gravity will fail to make her shower transform to rain
Then I saw fire in her eyes I cannot begin to explain
Now she lifts my spirit to fly on a new astral plane
After I fell I thought surely I'd never rise up again
I had not realized her poem spilled out of my pen
Until she sang with the voice of an angel in Zen
Perhaps she has grown from a garden lost in the snow
To remind me paradise is here so there's no need to go
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Re. Scarlet Sunrise
Anonymous
24th Sep 2017 1:38pm
What a beautiful love poem. That last line rounded it out perfectly and left me with a sigh on my lips.
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Re: Re. Scarlet Sunrise
24th Sep 2017 3:15pm
Thank you Ash! In a way it is a love poem, but more of a poem about friendship and someone special who has opened my eyes and lifted me from a black and white world into a higher plane where vivid colors shine on everything. Happiness is all around, sometimes you just have to see it... JJ
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2017 9:17pm
What a beautiful gift to receive ☺
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Re. Scarlet Sunrise
24th Sep 2017 5:21pm
such beauty in these words I was totally captivated - the last line is Perfection and oh if it was true :-))))))))
simply beautiful :-)
simply beautiful :-)
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24th Sep 2017 6:14pm
Do I ever write anything untrue David? Though perception of a poet's words can bring differing meanings to many perceivers... Thanks for the comment! JJ
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24th Sep 2017 8:01pm
I meant if it was true for me :-( especially the last two lines :-) Just being wistful and wishful in my thinking :-)
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Re. Scarlet Sunrise
24th Sep 2017 7:11pm
Honestly, I think this poem is so beautiful. There's just something about red heads right? Lol. Great write!
- jessica 🌺
- jessica 🌺
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Re: Re. Scarlet Sunrise
25th Sep 2017 00:35am
Yes, absolutely mesmerizing! And very inspiring! Makes me wish my hair stayed red year round when I was a young boy. But now it's all gray, so no one would ever know... :) Thank you for commenting Jessica!!! JJ
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30th Sep 2024 9:03am
I hope you like the song just as much... indeed, red is my favorite color in more than one place, er-ah, way... 😜 jj
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25th Sep 2017 00:40am
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Re. Scarlet Sunrise
24th Sep 2017 11:36pm
What a beautiful tribute to one who lifted your spirit .. just beautiful, from start to finish ...
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25th Sep 2017 00:43am
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25th Sep 2017 00:46am
The gifts are best when a muse stirs the heart so graciously! Thank you Jessica! JJ
Re. Scarlet Sunrise
8th Oct 2017 4:07am
This is breath-taking JJ, a masterpiece of the sweetest parts of love. <3
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