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Completely Gone
sometimes it hurts
not having her around
all those special moments
are now locked away in my head
I guess I'm the only one
who felt they were special
even though I would like to think
just maybe she cared the same
I wish to tell her that I miss her
but I can't
years have separated us
now her life has no place for me
still I ache for her company
my hands remain tied
never to break loose
if I should
I would only be shot down by rejection
maybe I could call her on the phone
congratulate her on her new relationship
but it's pointless
she seems so far gone
like I'm the last thing on her mind
not saying she's my first thought
but I hate that I can't just talk to an old friend
it doesn't have to be like before
I just don't want to feel like it's completely gone
not having her around
all those special moments
are now locked away in my head
I guess I'm the only one
who felt they were special
even though I would like to think
just maybe she cared the same
I wish to tell her that I miss her
but I can't
years have separated us
now her life has no place for me
still I ache for her company
my hands remain tied
never to break loose
if I should
I would only be shot down by rejection
maybe I could call her on the phone
congratulate her on her new relationship
but it's pointless
she seems so far gone
like I'm the last thing on her mind
not saying she's my first thought
but I hate that I can't just talk to an old friend
it doesn't have to be like before
I just don't want to feel like it's completely gone
Published 23rd Sep 2017
| Edited 23rd Oct 2018
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23rd Sep 2017 5:06pm
Sometimes, you have to make that call and reset the relationship, for better or worst ! 🌷
You're not the only one tormented by the severance.
You're not the only one tormented by the severance.
24th Sep 2017 5:03am
It's hard to let go of good friends. But people need to do what's best for them. I just wanted to write to get out those emotions that been eating at me for sometime. Thanks so much for reading 🤗
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2017 7:18pm
oh my.. ..
a smiling heart sinker
a smiling heart sinker
24th Sep 2017 5:05am
It does sink the heart. Time really doesn't heal those wounds. Just have to live with them. Thanks so much for reading 🤗
26th Sep 2017 3:20am
Been on that same road. Very well written and heartfelt, relatable poem. Thank you so much for sharing. Have a wonderful day:)
26th Sep 2017 10:29am
Anonymous
26th Sep 2017 10:20am
So handsomely beautiful.
26th Sep 2017 10:30am
23rd Oct 2017 7:39pm
That feeling is hard to deal with and i relate soooo much to this piece right now. Wow thanks for such an incredible piece one of my faves
24th Oct 2017 7:48am
Glad you enjoyed the poem. Sorry the love life isn’t working out though. Always a shame when the heart gets broken. Many hugs and well wishes from me to you 🤗
24th Oct 2017 8:18am
23rd Oct 2018 6:01am
I've recently been broken (up with) and she told me it was because we rarely chatted anymore.
Now we rarely chat, period.
I can almost foresee us having lots of distance and years preventing us from even the casual chat.
Your ink here is liken to a prophetic moment for me.
I'm wondering if we are able to let go, to release the memory..........if we wanted to.
Now we rarely chat, period.
I can almost foresee us having lots of distance and years preventing us from even the casual chat.
Your ink here is liken to a prophetic moment for me.
I'm wondering if we are able to let go, to release the memory..........if we wanted to.
