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Oxygen
Music is my oxygen
Drumming the beat to my heart
Pumping breath into my weak lungs
Music is my life support
Filling my leaking veins with blood
Pouring thought into my empty soul
Music is at my very core
Stitches of madness and sanity
Currents surging through my brain
Music feels my silence
And answers with beautiful vibrancy
New notes ripple with every echoing wave
Drumming the beat to my heart
Pumping breath into my weak lungs
Music is my life support
Filling my leaking veins with blood
Pouring thought into my empty soul
Music is at my very core
Stitches of madness and sanity
Currents surging through my brain
Music feels my silence
And answers with beautiful vibrancy
New notes ripple with every echoing wave
Published 20th Sep 2017
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 10:46pm
very beautiful piece
New notes ripple with every echoing wave<-----lovely line!
New notes ripple with every echoing wave<-----lovely line!
24th Sep 2017 7:54pm
7th Mar 2018 9:24am
love the ending here ! music is so powerful . i like how you speak of music giving you life .. filling you up and making you feel more alive
7th Mar 2018 5:00pm
8th Mar 2018 1:41am
It's true that music often describes exactly how we feel: it can also trigger intense emotions just by being heard.
Well done!
Well done!
8th Mar 2018 5:24pm
8th Mar 2018 5:14pm
You could easily have posted this in the lyrics section as well. It lends itself to music very well.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
8th Mar 2018 5:22pm
Thank you, I don't really have experience writing lyrics so it's something I don't consider much, but I appreciate the insight! I'm glad you like it :)
Rosegold
Rosegold
