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Midnight Sin
Midnight sin
Take me there
Where all lights are out
And lust fills the air
Nothing else on our mind
Just you and I
In our sin filled night
Bring me the feelings I desire
Allow your each touch
To set my every nerve to fire
Full force render to me the pain
Displeasure at first turns into pleasure
Subspace
See I have a painful yet playful plan for you and I
Where nothing else will be in your thoughts
By the end of the night
Just your body and mine
Skin to skin
Midnight sin
Take me there
Where all lights are out
And lust fills the air
Nothing else on our mind
Just you and I
In our sin filled night
Bring me the feelings I desire
Allow your each touch
To set my every nerve to fire
Full force render to me the pain
Displeasure at first turns into pleasure
Subspace
See I have a painful yet playful plan for you and I
Where nothing else will be in your thoughts
By the end of the night
Just your body and mine
Skin to skin
Midnight sin
Published 20th Sep 2017
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20th Sep 2017 8:39am
20th Sep 2017 9:12am
20th Sep 2017 9:31pm
20th Sep 2017 5:21pm
It's nice to read an erotic poem that doesn't need dirty words to express passion. Kind of a pet peeve of mine, especially on this website. I make a great effort to not use foul/fowl language when there are so many options for the imagination!
Excellent ink Krissy!!!
JJ
Excellent ink Krissy!!!
JJ
20th Sep 2017 5:23pm
20th Sep 2017 9:30pm
20th Sep 2017 9:31pm
21st Sep 2017 4:28am
Felt like your desires are very strong, not sure if they were satisfied to the level you wanted though...still, I liked this...
21st Feb 2018 5:16am
21st Feb 2018 7:46am
Anonymous
10th Sep 2018 11:58pm
I'm a very daring person. I believe that pleasure has no limit if consensual as we live certain of only the moment we live. Ergo Horatio's Carpe Diem. That doesn't mean that elegance isn't a must. And you truly have it. I'm sure you can only grow more and more. Poetess I salute you. J.
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Oct 2018 10:31pm
5th Oct 2018 10:30pm
fantastic, it is passion well expressed, but feels more like a memory or a desire, this is less about "when it did" and more along "when will it" isn't it?
feelings were subtle but there to be recognized if looked at, am I right ???
feelings were subtle but there to be recognized if looked at, am I right ???
10th Oct 2018 6:33pm
