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Fatal

I wished for a star
You gave me a hurricane
Beautiful, fatal

Written by lunacherry

Published 15th Sep 2017

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Re. Fatal

15th Sep 2017 8:14am

Love is such a duplicitous emotion. Nothing else can make life so beautiful or so horrible.
A lot packed into this Haiku Luna!
JJ

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Re. Fatal

15th Sep 2017 9:35am

some prefer high winds
some fear destruction
love,
hurricane for the individuals who fall

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Re. Fatal

Anonymous

17th Sep 2017 5:29am

Nice poem welcome underground.