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Burnt Down,
Burnt Out,
Trapped Inside,
Every Feeling of Doubt,
Pain,
Regret,
Heartache,
Sorrow,
No Hope for Tomorrow,
Tired,
Weak,
Helpless,
Lost,
How Many Tears will it Cost?
How Many Lifes will they Toss?
Stubbornness,
Stupidity,
Disconnected,
Stagnant,
Sucked in Like Magnates,
Greed,
Hatred,
Fear,
Poverty,
Privileged,
Or Priestley,
Black,
White,
Russian,
Or Asian,
The END is Coming Near,
And I dont see a way to SAVE it!!!!
Burnt Out,
Trapped Inside,
Every Feeling of Doubt,
Pain,
Regret,
Heartache,
Sorrow,
No Hope for Tomorrow,
Tired,
Weak,
Helpless,
Lost,
How Many Tears will it Cost?
How Many Lifes will they Toss?
Stubbornness,
Stupidity,
Disconnected,
Stagnant,
Sucked in Like Magnates,
Greed,
Hatred,
Fear,
Poverty,
Privileged,
Or Priestley,
Black,
White,
Russian,
Or Asian,
The END is Coming Near,
And I dont see a way to SAVE it!!!!
Published 13th Sep 2017
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2017 00:56am
What will be will be. We will all lose our lives at some point. It is not knowing when. Nice write & welcome to DUP my friend.
13th Sep 2017 00:57am
13th Sep 2017 1:13am
Welcome Moongoddess, I enjoyed how you fluctuate between short lines and single word lines. It makes for an interesting flow. I look forward to reading more.
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13th Sep 2017 2:06am
13th Sep 2017 2:27am
It shows you have a very compassionate soul, n I'm sure the ache of feeling helpless isn't
one where it can't be felt by others...
one where it can't be felt by others...
14th Sep 2017 00:03am
14th Sep 2017 00:18am
14th Sep 2017 00:20am
Worry not of yesterdays sorrows
For they have been written
That chapter is closed
Take from that book of yesterday and learn for new tomorrow
Fear not of tomorrows coming
For it is the future and has yet to be written
For prepare today for tomorrows new dawn
Fill your present with no fear and sorrow
Love and smile today to utmost fullest
That when there is no tomorrow
You look not over shoulder
And feel that sorrow
In short give everything you got for
Today and only deal with what is in your control. Set the example and move forward.
But you know this already , i see in your writing.
For they have been written
That chapter is closed
Take from that book of yesterday and learn for new tomorrow
Fear not of tomorrows coming
For it is the future and has yet to be written
For prepare today for tomorrows new dawn
Fill your present with no fear and sorrow
Love and smile today to utmost fullest
That when there is no tomorrow
You look not over shoulder
And feel that sorrow
In short give everything you got for
Today and only deal with what is in your control. Set the example and move forward.
But you know this already , i see in your writing.
14th Sep 2017 1:19am
14th Sep 2017 00:22am
this is a terrifically clever write, well rounded and though provoking - I don't know how to save it either :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
14th Sep 2017 1:20am
Thanks so much never considered it being a clever write...was just in a terrible place when I wrote this feeling as though the only way to cleanse my soul was to get it out!!! Thanks David.
Anonymous
14th Sep 2017 1:21am
Frightening realities are what you have captured with this ink....well done! What is meant to be will be - all things happen for a reason...I must believe there is better to be found beyond this realm...Welcome to DUP!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
Anonymous
20th Feb 2018 5:00am
This reads like an exciting scene. great job!
