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Knots
He bound
me
in knots
and
left
me
waiting
and
like a good
girl
I wait
patiently
waiting
to feel
the warmth
of his
breath
trailing my
flesh
as he
plunges
himself
into me
as if he
were
diving
into the
deep
blue
hue
of the
refreshing
Indian ocean.
me
in knots
and
left
me
waiting
and
like a good
girl
I wait
patiently
waiting
to feel
the warmth
of his
breath
trailing my
flesh
as he
plunges
himself
into me
as if he
were
diving
into the
deep
blue
hue
of the
refreshing
Indian ocean.
Published 9th Sep 2017
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9th Sep 2017 2:25am
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9th Sep 2017 7:16pm
Exotic and very elegant eroticism. He may plunge but what a vision he lands in! Fine work!
10th Sep 2017 5:57pm
The five stanzas in the shape of the woman in the photo to combine imagery with, well imagery? Excellent!
10th Sep 2017 10:00pm
Nice erotica, the simple words communicate such deep thoughts. I spent so much time in my mind imagining the whole encounter.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
