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EVERY NAKED STEP OF THE WAY
Every naked step of the way
I'm with you, as we head for the hay.
The bed will welcome us, more warmly
Than the surf we dipped in by the sea.
Its sheets and cover will enfold us
As we lie close, begin coitus
When, in the wetness of my body
I let you dip, then plunge into me.
Like the sea waves, up and down rocking
We will be, our limbs interlocking
Until the high point of passion's tide
Comes, then relax, let lust subside.
I'm with you, as we head for the hay.
The bed will welcome us, more warmly
Than the surf we dipped in by the sea.
Its sheets and cover will enfold us
As we lie close, begin coitus
When, in the wetness of my body
I let you dip, then plunge into me.
Like the sea waves, up and down rocking
We will be, our limbs interlocking
Until the high point of passion's tide
Comes, then relax, let lust subside.
Published 6th Sep 2017
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7th Sep 2017 1:06am
i love the lines "like the sea waves, up and down rocking we will be, our limbs interlocking". they really paint a vivid and wonderful picture in my mind.
7th Sep 2017 1:52am
Rocking up and down ... takes me back to making love on a raft at summer camp ...
7th Sep 2017 6:23am
The use of nautical expressions and similes was intentional. As to your memories...tempted to say "you rafty devil!" LOL.
7th Sep 2017 12:37pm
13th Sep 2017 1:01pm
Intensely passionate... and beautiful write ! 😎🌞🌷☄
The world would be screwed, without passion ! 🎈
The world would be screwed, without passion ! 🎈
11th Mar 2025 6:46am
