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sonnet- of art and heart
when a matter of art became matter of heart
the end became the means of justification
though all could see the art but a few saw the start
emotions leaving not differentiation
of art he was the king of hearts she was the queen
usual was the odd clique of their detractors
through their own artful ways they so did vent their spleen
the two subjects of love cared of no such factors
on the mural of life the detraction was blush
the glow of love and art blighted the dark chapel
give the detractors an inch neither was in rush
the reality of truth was hard to grapple
forgive and forget the king and the queen did not
something the libellers expected quite a lot
credit: Johnny Blaze for the correction in title.
the end became the means of justification
though all could see the art but a few saw the start
emotions leaving not differentiation
of art he was the king of hearts she was the queen
usual was the odd clique of their detractors
through their own artful ways they so did vent their spleen
the two subjects of love cared of no such factors
on the mural of life the detraction was blush
the glow of love and art blighted the dark chapel
give the detractors an inch neither was in rush
the reality of truth was hard to grapple
forgive and forget the king and the queen did not
something the libellers expected quite a lot
credit: Johnny Blaze for the correction in title.
Published 26th Aug 2017
| Edited 27th Aug 2017
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27th Aug 2017 2:54am
Lovely, lovely piece of writing, cannot praise this enough!
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
a peer's visit
heartening
a peer's review
invaluable.
deep
deep
appreciation.
heartening
a peer's review
invaluable.
deep
deep
appreciation.
27th Aug 2017 6:28am
wow... that was great.. beautiful craftsmanship. Wish I could offer something other than simple praise, but that's all I have.. keeping it real!
27th Aug 2017 2:42pm
a peer
for whose talent
there is deep appreciation
a review such as this
nothing but humbling
deep appreciation
of the peer
and
the review
for whose talent
there is deep appreciation
a review such as this
nothing but humbling
deep appreciation
of the peer
and
the review
27th Aug 2017 6:55am
Far out that's a bit trippy! Your poem could be the story of how my partner and I got together!
Great ink!
Great ink!
27th Aug 2017 2:44pm
a peer's visit
and such appreciation
is heartening.
glad
the word
for how two souls met.
appreciation
held close
for the visit
and
the review
and such appreciation
is heartening.
glad
the word
for how two souls met.
appreciation
held close
for the visit
and
the review
27th Aug 2017 4:36pm
When first I read this, I knew I liked it, thus the RL, but I was not sure exactly why, only that it spoke to me beautifully. Upon rereading and repeatedly more, it finally occurred as to why.
The various interpretations I found myself reading into it and the beauty of the words within.
The conveyance of outside views of others to a matter of no concern to them and the rebuff of those views, were but one.
Well crafted and presented with a message conveyed.
The various interpretations I found myself reading into it and the beauty of the words within.
The conveyance of outside views of others to a matter of no concern to them and the rebuff of those views, were but one.
Well crafted and presented with a message conveyed.
27th Aug 2017 4:44pm
the expression
was a work in progress
till some spare time was found
last night.
a story of two passionate souls
their detractors
demanded to be told
in a form classic
hence the sonnet.
story is true
'cept the volta.
beauty of poetry
as a peer mentioned to me earlier
is that each reader
has a unique interpretation.
Yours was beautiful, and apt.
a peer's visit
a peer's review
a peer's honesty
couldn't be closer.
gratitude.
was a work in progress
till some spare time was found
last night.
a story of two passionate souls
their detractors
demanded to be told
in a form classic
hence the sonnet.
story is true
'cept the volta.
beauty of poetry
as a peer mentioned to me earlier
is that each reader
has a unique interpretation.
Yours was beautiful, and apt.
a peer's visit
a peer's review
a peer's honesty
couldn't be closer.
gratitude.
27th Aug 2017 4:36pm
an
observation
that demanded an expression
a peer's
visit
appreciation
always
heartening.
observation
that demanded an expression
a peer's
visit
appreciation
always
heartening.
29th Aug 2017 6:19pm
It is clear that love is both a tango and a duel between both the hearts and minds of the lovers. They could club the shit out of hit or debate it. Clearly yours proves that people can't seem to butt out of two people's business and prefer to speculate and expect what comes next. I like this piece because there are many dynamic images and situations in it where the lovers sometimes equally lead and other times one takes the lead. This was as brisk as a salsa and as exciting as a duel. Nicely penned my friend!!!
29th Aug 2017 10:32pm
a peer's review
and with some
depth
couldn't have asked
for a better feedback.
deep gratitude.
people
sometimes focus
too much
on others and
can't help
but keep out.
welcome
is the peer
and the
review.
and with some
depth
couldn't have asked
for a better feedback.
deep gratitude.
people
sometimes focus
too much
on others and
can't help
but keep out.
welcome
is the peer
and the
review.
