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it is us
It is us who bleeds
the little ones
in a country
we have never seen
where our pious words
travel a line
of skeletal women
who wait for the pain
of loney graves
the little ones
in a country
we have never seen
where our pious words
travel a line
of skeletal women
who wait for the pain
of loney graves
Published 8th Sep 2011
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8th Sep 2011 2:32pm
This is wonderful. Concise and to the point. The imagery is perfect. One typo though, last line, you'll spot it. Tres Bien!
8th Sep 2011 5:31pm
