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No Feeling
no smile
no tears
no feeling
get away
leave me here
staring at the ceiling
thoughts vile
heartbeat slow
mind reeling
endless day
locked alone
no healing
no tears
no feeling
get away
leave me here
staring at the ceiling
thoughts vile
heartbeat slow
mind reeling
endless day
locked alone
no healing
Published 9th Aug 2017
| Edited 6th Oct 2020
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9th Aug 2017 6:11am
Ah, mind reeling. I feel the mind is siting on a old broken couch uncomfortably but numbly going through and old box of film reels with sad memories. Short, slow, and sad, like the poem. I feel like this would be beautiful sung.
9th Aug 2017 6:49am
Anonymous
9th Aug 2017 10:33am
Love it. Can well relate to it. Short and precise. Clearly describes.
9th Aug 2017 10:41am
