Slowdance

What a beautiful poem, dancing with your words... I also like the format, very unique and grabbing. Welcome to DUP!

- Fairy

Thank you, Fairy :) xoxo

You have put lots of beautiful words together here and it flows so wonderfully! It made me feel happy! Xo

Chemistry between a stranger and I inspired this piece. Thank you for your comment, and I love that it made you feel happy :) xo

Hello and welcome

I found the pic a little distracting, that said I persevered and got through

good  stuff, written well, an air of romantics and confidence

*hat tip*

Thank you for the welcome, and your kind words. The pic! LOL! That pic was taken on the very day I wrote this poem, so I felt moved to add it to the poem. Thank you for persevering and reading to the end. Appreciated.

The sensuality of this piece is palpable...even without any physical contact,  i could still feel the energy that sparked between these two individuals!  With your lovely, vivid imagery in mind, i am closing my eyes....imaging myself dancing this same slow dance!

Intriguing Ink!

A very warm welcome to the world of the Deep Underground!

Thank you for your insightful, kind, supportive - and welcoming words. I appreciate it so much. Slow dances are so sensual, aren't they? ;) I love your view of reading it. Thank you xo

Girl you got my attention
That's a good thing
God bless you

Aw :) Thank you for bringing a smile to my face.

I felt as if I was dancing with this invisible companion myself!  Beautiful imagery & mystery! :)

Ahhhh, I love that you felt this way. It's beautiful that it evoked the feeling of dancing for you too. Thank you for the feedback :)

Always glad to share it, Youre very welcome !

Automatically heard the lyrics
by midnight Starr... "play another slow dance...this time for baby"
Ppplllaaayyy another slow dance... :) nice work, beautiful pic.

I should do a spoken version of this - because I am a frightful singer!! :D.... thank you for your lovely comment. x

Perfectly blended Intimacy and mystery, gives you a little high off of curiosity this kind of writing hooks you, lurks you in and makes you want more...really enjoyed this  

I'm happy that you did :) Thank you so much for commenting. It's encouraging and inspires me to write more. X

The only way I know how to dance is like Arthur Fonzarelli “ The Fonz” from Happy Days.  So I guess you will have to rest your head on my shoulder.   Love the intimacy of this piece with a complete stranger.  Wonderfully done.

Thank you for the write.

Okay, now I need to YT this, to see what you mean, lol.

This is one of those slow, intimate dances of the mind. Chemistry.

Thank you for reading and your comment x