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Sapphic
Soak your subtleties
In simmering sensuous sanctions
With me lazing easily eager
Upon ambient aubade
Secluded terraces
Becloud the moon like bedroom blinds
Drawn to confound inquisitive prying
From voyeur eyes
Hot springs soften skin
To drape 'round
Panting responsive torsos of inamorata
& entangled limbs
Flesh
Reflecting wryly
Crisp crescent light of
Cygnus smirking, his glowing intrigue
Playing out on a lyre of stars
Descending songs from milky heights
To grace our
Pretty parting slits
Inviting ingressing index tips
Fresh forays for fledglings
Trying dilettante frivolity
Albeit unversed
At finger play
In simmering sensuous sanctions
With me lazing easily eager
Upon ambient aubade
Secluded terraces
Becloud the moon like bedroom blinds
Drawn to confound inquisitive prying
From voyeur eyes
Hot springs soften skin
To drape 'round
Panting responsive torsos of inamorata
& entangled limbs
Flesh
Reflecting wryly
Crisp crescent light of
Cygnus smirking, his glowing intrigue
Playing out on a lyre of stars
Descending songs from milky heights
To grace our
Pretty parting slits
Inviting ingressing index tips
Fresh forays for fledglings
Trying dilettante frivolity
Albeit unversed
At finger play
Published 4th Aug 2017
| Edited 30th Sep 2017
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4th Aug 2017 9:56am
takes a girl to know a girl,
as Sappho creates verses on her island
in the Mediterranean...
as Sappho creates verses on her island
in the Mediterranean...
4th Aug 2017 10:12am
this is my vision, you might enjoy it:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/199852-sappho-indiscreet/
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/199852-sappho-indiscreet/
...
4th Aug 2017 10:48am
So engaging and beautiful! Rich descriptions and narrative, thank you for sharing!
4th Aug 2017 4:04pm
very rich imagery and vocabulary.
the second stanza
"Becloud the moon like bedroom blinds,
Drawn to confound inquisitive prying,
From voyeur eyes. " is fantastic.
it ends on such a sensual note.well penned AtoMikbomb,keep'em coming.
the second stanza
"Becloud the moon like bedroom blinds,
Drawn to confound inquisitive prying,
From voyeur eyes. " is fantastic.
it ends on such a sensual note.well penned AtoMikbomb,keep'em coming.
4th Aug 2017 10:13pm
5th Aug 2017 6:34pm
