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How could I let my guard down? updated version of it
I was so sad
Then I saw you
Sparkling in the light
Blades so sharp
Cutting and digging
Blooding and fainting
And now I’m dying
UPDATED VERSION!!!
I was so sad
Then I saw you
Sparkling in the light
Blades so sharp
Cutting and digging
Blooding and fainting
Now your crying
You say “why, why did you attempted to kill yourself”,
I say “cause I hate my life
Now let me die or ill keep cutting till I do”
Then I saw you
Sparkling in the light
Blades so sharp
Cutting and digging
Blooding and fainting
And now I’m dying
UPDATED VERSION!!!
I was so sad
Then I saw you
Sparkling in the light
Blades so sharp
Cutting and digging
Blooding and fainting
Now your crying
You say “why, why did you attempted to kill yourself”,
I say “cause I hate my life
Now let me die or ill keep cutting till I do”
Published 4th Sep 2011
| Edited 7th Sep 2011
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2011 4:43am
sad end to a nice write
6th Sep 2011 4:11am
