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a dance in rage
The wrath that blankets my vision
Alters the path of a fatal decision
Leaving me longing to be encumbered
Nestled by a desire lost while you slumbered
A painted reflection replaces your part
As we dance in rage two hearts apart
Without the music nor even a beat
I melt alone in forbidden heat
Alters the path of a fatal decision
Leaving me longing to be encumbered
Nestled by a desire lost while you slumbered
A painted reflection replaces your part
As we dance in rage two hearts apart
Without the music nor even a beat
I melt alone in forbidden heat
Published 20th Jul 2017
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20th Jul 2017 5:38pm
20th Jul 2017 5:38pm
Anonymous
20th Jul 2017 5:45pm
Wow, what an intense piece. I can't tell if the anger is because of loss or the loss is because of anger. And again, my interpretation could be miles off the mark.
20th Jul 2017 6:58pm
methinks rage best describes what i was feeling....rage birthed from pent up passion from someone who only pretended to love me. sigh.....
24th Sep 2017 2:21pm
"A painted reflection replaces your part"...my favorite line. Love this piece!
2nd Oct 2017 8:40pm
