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A Sky Unfolds
Skies, endless splendor,.
Seep forth from my eyes,.
Clouds form over haunted towns,.
They drown when I flick my tongue,.
They drown when you ripped me apart,.
Ancient cities burn asunder,.
As a sky blackens, a star is born,.
Above the milky way,.
A cosmic alliance is formed,.
With my mind closed off from reality,.
I imagine there is nothing but splendor,.
I imagine my dreams unfolding like a sky in god's eye,..,.,.,.
Seep forth from my eyes,.
Clouds form over haunted towns,.
They drown when I flick my tongue,.
They drown when you ripped me apart,.
Ancient cities burn asunder,.
As a sky blackens, a star is born,.
Above the milky way,.
A cosmic alliance is formed,.
With my mind closed off from reality,.
I imagine there is nothing but splendor,.
I imagine my dreams unfolding like a sky in god's eye,..,.,.,.
Published 18th Jul 2017
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2017 1:13am
You weaved light and dark with such balance conveying your emotions well.
Welcome to du :)
Welcome to du :)
18th Jul 2017 1:40am
18th Jul 2017 3:34am
The imagery was amazing. The way you equated rain and tears was genius. I saw little pencil sketch tear drops falling from sad blue eyes in the morning dawn's endless horizon.
It was captivating.
I like how you paired ancient cities and cosmic alliances. Dark, prophetic, and more real than reality.
The entire piece was very well written and I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing,
EG
It was captivating.
I like how you paired ancient cities and cosmic alliances. Dark, prophetic, and more real than reality.
The entire piece was very well written and I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing,
EG
18th Jul 2017 11:54am
