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Forever
My life is over now that you're gone
Now I'm left all alone
I can't believe that I'll never see you again to me it's like the world is coming to an end
I love you, I need you, I'm hopeless without you
Can't you see what you're doing to me
I loved you then and I love you now I can't stop loving you because i don't know how
I'll love you forever just wait and see because i know that you're the only one for me
Now I'm left all alone
I can't believe that I'll never see you again to me it's like the world is coming to an end
I love you, I need you, I'm hopeless without you
Can't you see what you're doing to me
I loved you then and I love you now I can't stop loving you because i don't know how
I'll love you forever just wait and see because i know that you're the only one for me
Published 16th Jul 2017
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16th Jul 2017 8:02am
I love the feeling of desperation and the scream you show through your poem😊good job😊
16th Jul 2017 8:09am
Thank you for your feedback. I was feeling alot as I wrote this. Glad it shown through
