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Hazel Eyes
Teenage hazel eyes
Burger and fries
So full of why's
Sex a surprise
Future to terrorise
Love she denies
20's hazel eyes
Bulimic skinny thighs
Battle cries, against why's
Sexuality on the rise
Future glamorise
Love she implies
30's hazel eyes
Pizza pies
30 something why's
Sexual affair applies
Future; weed smokin highs
Love's lust a disguise
40's hazel eyes
Professional bar flies
Too drunk for why's
S & M sexualize
Still seeking the prize
Love is almost likewise
50's hazel eyes
Fish sandwich, tofu fries
Worrying about the why's
Sex is a fantasize
The future unties
Love gets a revise
60's hazel eyes
Apple pies
Different kind of why's
For sex, Viagra relies
Failing health hospitalise
I love you she replies
She had hazel eyes
Failing; she dies
No more whys
Never deeper sighs
Nobody to hear my cries
Losing my love; hazel eyes
Published 11th Jul 2017
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11th Jul 2017 9:23pm
13th Jul 2017 2:29am
12th Jul 2017 2:54am
Hey David.......what a heart felt ink......you're such a brilliant talent......RL for me cause I have hazel eyes.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
13th Jul 2017 2:30am
here was me thinking you had purple eyes :-) Glad you like this - ehugs on their way :-)
Anonymous
12th Jul 2017 1:59pm
You painted her portrait so beautifully that the pain is all the more potent in this one. Many many hugs coming your way...
13th Jul 2017 2:31am
for me its always the eyes first :-( thank you for your kind words - made me smile again :-)
12th Jul 2017 3:03pm
David...so sad...but such a touching, and lovely story!
The thought, that throughout all those years....through all the many changes of (their) love...the bond--(between the poet, and his special lady) -- remained unbroken.....as stead-fast as the beauty he found in her hazel eyes...
An exceptional, and memorable piece, mo Chara! xo
The thought, that throughout all those years....through all the many changes of (their) love...the bond--(between the poet, and his special lady) -- remained unbroken.....as stead-fast as the beauty he found in her hazel eyes...
An exceptional, and memorable piece, mo Chara! xo
13th Jul 2017 2:33am
I am really glad you think so - at least I didn't murder her in the end :-)
1000 ehugs on their way :-)
1000 ehugs on their way :-)
