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gathered my wanton disarrayed debris messed allover
running till nowhere, in numbed residues smashed
to beautiful ruins
(lips)
trying hard to pull back the lukewarmly (mother) tongues
of looming warps and wafts
(lips*lips)
i shrink and shrivel in repetitive convulsive episodes
of an inward shrieking ecstasy unto an abyss of release
(lspipils)
still ruminating after all the conception
'to be or not to be'
to be that unleashing response longed for with your such divinity stimuli
or to not to be- and drown selves in bogging silence
of a plasticized solitude
had ardently missed you like ever-elongating eons
had kissed you instantly back now in all that robustive quench
those small luminosities.. no-sheepish cool smiles in answering
steadfast angers I burn often
that was [and is] love
Published 27th Jun 2017
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28th Jun 2017 00:48am
Yes, it is dear friend! I feel your words as blessing on this 'love'..
much love to you for inspiring words ev;)
much love to you for inspiring words ev;)
This is really different and I like it, in a complex poem like this its important to have a meaningful ending and you do, it works I think to convey the message, and the whole thing is creative, I like the ' looming ' reference and the warp and weft as a metaphor .....
2nd Jul 2017 7:27pm
I love the way you feel and analyse the complexities of a poem PR!- analysing still feeling the essence as a whole..Thank you & would love to read ur wonderful scribes
28th Jun 2017 12:50pm
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3rd Jul 2017 7:30pm
"Robustive" is not a word. my favorite words are "i shrink and shrivel in repetitive convulsive episodes / of an inward shrieking ecstasy unto an abyss of release."
