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Milksop Schwein and Scheissers
O you red-blooded künstler scheissers
Bleeding kings and queens of schwein
Royal flush butchered milksop hearts
Mincing crude words of offal and fowl
Bleeding kings and queens of schwein
Alluring sirens gambol the devil's hide
Mincing crude words of offal and fowl
Wrath feeding schutzstaffel soldier girls
Alluring sirens gambol the devil's hide
Jangling dreamcatcher cock ring jive
Wrath feeding schutzstaffel soldier girls
Wearing silk blindfolds for chastity belts
Jangling dreamcatcher cock ring jive
Royal flush butchered milksop hearts
Wearing silk blindfolds for chastity belts
O you red-blooded künstler scheissers
Published 25th Jun 2017
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25th Jun 2017 11:34am
Pantoumonium!
This is fantastic, Case. Sharp and cutting right along the edge.
This is fantastic, Case. Sharp and cutting right along the edge.
Well, I think it was more ass than class that the poem was written to a PANDEMONIUM theme, I was more focused on the structure and flow of the poem, which has lead to the major overhaul since you commented... but I think you know how anal I am about editing, my poems are rarely spared from my critical eye once they've been posted.
Thanks Ahavati for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
Thanks Ahavati for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
25th Jun 2017 4:35pm
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25th Jun 2017 5:52pm
( LOL!!)
Alexander, my friend....Experiencing a bit of a 'royal flush'....after reading this one!
Not only is this a well crafted pantoum, but your topic, and word choices, combined with your wry humor, make this one a delight to read--especially for those who understand the language, and especially when read aloud, (with a sarcastic tone.)
[ Hee! Hee! } IMHO....
A bit of a Satirical Scribe...of Enjoyment!
Alexander, my friend....Experiencing a bit of a 'royal flush'....after reading this one!
Not only is this a well crafted pantoum, but your topic, and word choices, combined with your wry humor, make this one a delight to read--especially for those who understand the language, and especially when read aloud, (with a sarcastic tone.)
[ Hee! Hee! } IMHO....
A bit of a Satirical Scribe...of Enjoyment!
7th Aug 2017 9:13am
great nourishment for the soldier girls,
an army travels on its stomach;
fine German krafting...
an army travels on its stomach;
fine German krafting...
