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Ring [A]
I keep on thinking
‘bout that ring ‘round Your finger ...
... need You to know that
I shall forever linger
in its folds—
‘thin You, and ‘round You,
ev’ry step of the day.
‘bout that ring ‘round Your finger ...
... need You to know that
I shall forever linger
in its folds—
‘thin You, and ‘round You,
ev’ry step of the day.
Published 15th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2017 1:02am
A short verse which holds and says much...I especially like the way you capitalize the "Y"...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
27th Jul 2017 3:58pm
27th Jul 2017 6:12pm
Agreed, Shadow Starzzz ... but this was just a 'promise ring' of sorts--a symbol of that grander intention. ;) Thanks for reading and for Your comment. Michael
... and here is the 'grander' poem expressing that intention even further:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/273762-the-infinite-splendor-of-all-things/
Thanks, again! M~
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/273762-the-infinite-splendor-of-all-things/
Thanks, again! M~
