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Far Away
Fantasies.... A mire alternate universe where people want to escape; for Wishes, Love, Wonders, and deepest desires. I find myself there a lot, cause its painless. Where Hidden Dreams frolic and indulge a fake reality. where smiles are not as unnatural, & emotions are raw. As I leave my physical appearance to stay present in this world. My mind is there. Filled with forbidden Desire, unspoken dreams, & Alienated aspirations . It pains me to return, return here. Where sorrow overwhelms your body and all you can do is hide emptiness with yet a doubted smile. Lying everyday to yourself, just to make it through the next second, one more minute, & yet another hour. Emptiness NEVER felt so heavy.
Feeling to the point where the foundation of your life is slowly disintegrating & all you're left with is broken promises, that you made to yourself. Alone is how I am, so alone is where I stand. Until I can allow my mind to departure away from this world and into my alternate universe where I feel needed. Where a happy ending can exist, where freedom feels reinvigorating & the tears mean something other than pain. Some where Far Away.... From Life Itself.
Feeling to the point where the foundation of your life is slowly disintegrating & all you're left with is broken promises, that you made to yourself. Alone is how I am, so alone is where I stand. Until I can allow my mind to departure away from this world and into my alternate universe where I feel needed. Where a happy ending can exist, where freedom feels reinvigorating & the tears mean something other than pain. Some where Far Away.... From Life Itself.
Published 14th Jun 2017
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14th Jun 2017 5:41am
I loved this as i can totally relate to every word. I differentiate only regarding the "fake reality" of the dreamworld. For the brain, the core of our being forever isolated inside the cranial cavity, the physical world is nothing but a cloud of electrical impulses. So is there abig difference if these are generated by our body's sensors or them being intrinsic in origin ? Indeed,it is all in our minds....and it is our choice in what world we live in.
Some choose to live in the "real" world...i personally feel a whole lot better existing in a world devoid of all you said "Where sorrow overwhelms your body and all you can do is hide emptiness with yet a doubted smile. Lying everyday to yourself, just to make it through the next second, one more minute, & yet another hour. "
We are what we have inside. And in me, i have found my Avalon. While i existed outside this world devoured my Spirit and slowly assimilated me. Sorry realists, i fly away beyond the horizon...and it feels damn fine lol.
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, thank you for creating and posting it :)
Some choose to live in the "real" world...i personally feel a whole lot better existing in a world devoid of all you said "Where sorrow overwhelms your body and all you can do is hide emptiness with yet a doubted smile. Lying everyday to yourself, just to make it through the next second, one more minute, & yet another hour. "
We are what we have inside. And in me, i have found my Avalon. While i existed outside this world devoured my Spirit and slowly assimilated me. Sorry realists, i fly away beyond the horizon...and it feels damn fine lol.
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, thank you for creating and posting it :)
16th Jun 2017 4:58am
i definitely agree, and how you put it really opens my mind more. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ☺
