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I can feel you
through your words
they speak to me
and mesmerize me
they enter me
and move around
slowly and sensuously
then faster and more ardently
sweetness seeping through
but also great urgency
first flooding
then releasing me
your words I love them
they are creamy
and delicious
just like you
through your words
they speak to me
and mesmerize me
they enter me
and move around
slowly and sensuously
then faster and more ardently
sweetness seeping through
but also great urgency
first flooding
then releasing me
your words I love them
they are creamy
and delicious
just like you
Published 29th Aug 2011
| Edited 5th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2011 7:35am
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29th Aug 2011 7:39am
Thank you. I am happy that you enjoy some of my poetry the way I enjoy yours.
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2018 6:45am
10th Oct 2011 9:48am
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10th Oct 2011 8:55pm
So happy my words spoke to you and that you are a fellow poet appreciating this site like I do. :)
7th Oct 2013 7:13pm
7th Oct 2013 10:27pm
Thank u. I am glad u got enjoyment from my little poem.
I just re-read it and quite like the way it turned out.......
btw I still feel that way about a certain someone....... :)
I just re-read it and quite like the way it turned out.......
btw I still feel that way about a certain someone....... :)
