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Crimson Rivers
exposed emotions
blister 'neath
your numbing gaze
of indifference
that roars
in thunderous waves
to crash upon
the battered shores
of my heart
exposed emotions
drivin' me insane
their hungry voices
screamin' in my head
behold a night wind
leads me
to a place
where dangerous visions
softly tread
take my heart
take my soul
take anything you want
don't take my sons
take my heart
take my soul
take my life if you must
just don't take my sons
don't take my sons
exposed emotions
out of control
a raging firestorm
burnin' thru my soul
behold a storm wind
carries me away
where crimson rivers
twist and bend
on these endless
desert sands
cover me in shades
of golden brown
a trackless dune
in desert lands
where crimson rivers
twist and bend
twist and bend
in these bitter
endless sands
take my heart
take my soul
take anything you want
don't take my sons
take my heart
take my soul
take my life if you must
i'm under your thumb
you've got the gun
Published 29th May 2017
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2017 2:52am
This is brilliant, I love it
11th Jun 2017 4:23pm
Thank you Glass - i'm glad you liked this piece
Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
ALL the Best
jonni
Anonymous
19th Aug 2017 8:11pm
feels like greif, hope youre ok
aye - grief it was, but as all things are want to do, this too has also passed - for the most part... Thank You Sunset. ALL the Best jonni
