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Re. Dragon Fly
3rd May 2017 1:17pm
of different worlds,
yet so deeply in the same world;
blue is the color of this...
yet so deeply in the same world;
blue is the color of this...
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
4th May 2017 1:08am
Thank you so much JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments ... Always appreciated
Re. Dragon Fly
3rd May 2017 2:47pm
Re: Re. Dragon Fly
4th May 2017 1:09am
Thank you so much Tim for the read and thoughtful comments ... always appreciated
Re. Dragon Fly
Anonymous
3rd May 2017 3:18pm
That first line is superb Jeje, its packed with so much meaning, beautifully sad.
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
4th May 2017 1:10am
Thank You so much Rina for the read and beautiful comments .. always appreciated
Re. Dragon Fly
3rd May 2017 7:32pm
Some kind of different way to experience a 'blue' phase - the imagination is rolling.
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
4th May 2017 1:11am
Thank You so much Josh for the read and thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
Re. Dragon Fly
Anonymous
4th May 2017 4:24am
A gentleness cam over while reading this. Thank you Jem' for it
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
4th May 2017 5:06pm
Thank you so much Splitsunsets for the read and lovely comments... much appreciated. x
Re. Dragon Fly
5th May 2017 11:57am
I knew he was a shapeshifter... (My feline com padre)
Tis a Beautiful Write-Poetry at it's best Je!!!
Tis a Beautiful Write-Poetry at it's best Je!!!
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
5th May 2017 5:44pm
Thank you so much souladareatease for the read and thoughtful comments ... much appreciated.
Re. Dragon Fly
5th May 2017 6:02pm
Blue came to me once disguised as a circus elephant with a cruel master - strange how our words affect different people in different ways :-)
excellent :-)
excellent :-)
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
5th May 2017 8:40pm
That is so true David ... interpretation is interesting and fun .. Thank you so much for yours .. for the read and comments .. much appreciated
Re. Dragon Fly
8th May 2017 7:36pm
this feels some steady sturdily settled heaviness however short or long...this blue metaphorized as dragonfly. Its also interesting to the relation you made. both the entities bring in some mechanized happening some gruelling lonlinesss feel...u had a vivid obscurity mood n feelcreated in such shortness jeje.. fine work xx
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
9th May 2017 1:45am
Thank you so much Uma for the read and taking the time to leave such thoughtful comments ... greatly appreciated, as was the add to your RL .. humbled and honored xo
Re. Dragon Fly
11th May 2017 1:20pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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Re: Re. Dragon Fly
11th May 2017 3:07pm
Thank you so much uma for adding my poem into the poem of the month comp. Humbled and honored by the gesture .. ox