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Ageless Desire
Last night grandma jones
lived her lifelong dream
six super dark dicks
jammed her holes with cream
she had a butt-gasm
and her old knees buckled
her ass was a chasm
and her husband
a cuckold
the interracial gang-bang
went real well
that night her heart exploded
she went straight to hell
lived her lifelong dream
six super dark dicks
jammed her holes with cream
she had a butt-gasm
and her old knees buckled
her ass was a chasm
and her husband
a cuckold
the interracial gang-bang
went real well
that night her heart exploded
she went straight to hell
Published 21st Apr 2017
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21st Apr 2017 1:08pm
Dang, its not bright and vibrant, it's shady and full of despair. Like you did it now. It was fun, but was it really worth it. Is that your point of view? Why they gotta go to hell just cause they enjoyed sensual pleasure?
22nd Apr 2017 1:49am
Thanks for the comment freaknastypoet(love the name!)
I think your assessment of the POV is accurate. Though I should have made it clearer in the poem that it was most definitely worth it. She loved it.
Why they gotta go to hell? I don't make the rules, but, they are very clear on this matter.
I think your assessment of the POV is accurate. Though I should have made it clearer in the poem that it was most definitely worth it. She loved it.
Why they gotta go to hell? I don't make the rules, but, they are very clear on this matter.
