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My pussy CRIES for you
My pussy
CRIES for you
when I'm
all alone
and naked
in the bed
my kitty
is used
to making
you hard
and fucking
me instead
my kitty cat
is upset
I need
to feel
your bone
I can't
go on
another night
without a
sudden moan
you always
satisfy me
I tremble
when you're near
my "V" shaped
legs are
calling you
I'm wet
from pussy tears
dripping down
my soft
long legs
and on
my satin sheets
you know....
the very same
satin sheets
where your
DICK and
my PUSSY meet
I need
you in
my vagina
my pussy
CRIES
for you
I've tried
to block
you out
of my mind
but it's just
too hard
to do.......
"I miss you baby"
CRIES for you
when I'm
all alone
and naked
in the bed
my kitty
is used
to making
you hard
and fucking
me instead
my kitty cat
is upset
I need
to feel
your bone
I can't
go on
another night
without a
sudden moan
you always
satisfy me
I tremble
when you're near
my "V" shaped
legs are
calling you
I'm wet
from pussy tears
dripping down
my soft
long legs
and on
my satin sheets
you know....
the very same
satin sheets
where your
DICK and
my PUSSY meet
I need
you in
my vagina
my pussy
CRIES
for you
I've tried
to block
you out
of my mind
but it's just
too hard
to do.......
"I miss you baby"
Published 21st Apr 2017
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21st Apr 2017 1:27am
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21st Apr 2017 2:45am
my kitty cat
is upset
I need
to feel
your bone
"I can't
go on
another night
without a
sudden moan
you always
satisfy me"
wow after reading this ink I see your ad-Dic-tion hehe... very hot drop PrivateP!
is upset
I need
to feel
your bone
"I can't
go on
another night
without a
sudden moan
you always
satisfy me"
wow after reading this ink I see your ad-Dic-tion hehe... very hot drop PrivateP!
21st Apr 2017 3:50am
21st Apr 2017 12:40pm
Your selected title indicated this poem was likely a must read.
It did not disappoint!
Very hot;)
It did not disappoint!
Very hot;)
21st Apr 2017 5:55pm
22nd Apr 2017 7:58am
The subject matter is entertaining, though a few more euphemisms for vagina could be incorporated to add appeal and variety
22nd Apr 2017 12:31pm
I wrote it just the way I WANTED IT and felt it should be written.I FEED off of MY THOUGHTS not yours but thanks for your FEEDback.😊
22nd Apr 2017 10:24pm
Personal poetry should be written based on the author's feelings. However, published poetry is more methodical in its composition. I realize that this is personal poetry, but in a public forum you should expect comments like mine. If you are not open to honest critiques from others about how your poem could be improved for a larger audIence, perhaps you should refrain from noting that you encourage honest feedback.
You appear to have WRITER'S BLOCK scarlettdalia624 You are waaaaaaaaaay too focused on my writing skills.I would consider writing your OWN work for therapy,it helps a lonely and irritated soul.Try reading one of my poems entitled........MY PUSSY NEEDS ATTENTION that may be your remedy,let me know if that alleviated your stress,if it does not,your pussy is CRYING for all the wrong reasons.If I were you I would then make an appointment with Dr.Disease,your gynecologist.
