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A Life Without You
A life without you
Would be no life at all
No-one to catch me
If by chance I should fall
A readily available friendly ear
That always gives good advice
Your typical Cancerian traits
Always add a touch of spice
I’m a stereotypical Gemini
With a typical butterfly mind
Go on, admit it, it’s true
I won't think you’re being unkind
Putting up with my ever-changing moods
You must have the patience of a saint
You are always very tolerant
And I never hear one complaint
We can have a difference of opinion
But always try to see each others point of view
I often think I’m in the right
And often so do you
You are my reason for living
The ray of sunshine that brightens my day
You’ve got a permanent place in my heart
What more is there to say?
Would be no life at all
No-one to catch me
If by chance I should fall
A readily available friendly ear
That always gives good advice
Your typical Cancerian traits
Always add a touch of spice
I’m a stereotypical Gemini
With a typical butterfly mind
Go on, admit it, it’s true
I won't think you’re being unkind
Putting up with my ever-changing moods
You must have the patience of a saint
You are always very tolerant
And I never hear one complaint
We can have a difference of opinion
But always try to see each others point of view
I often think I’m in the right
And often so do you
You are my reason for living
The ray of sunshine that brightens my day
You’ve got a permanent place in my heart
What more is there to say?
Published 30th Mar 2017
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30th Mar 2017 10:45pm
15th Apr 2017 2:12am
the change in meter length, between the first two stanzas, felt a bit sudden and awkward. my favorite stanzas are the last 3 stanzas with their light atmosphere of conflict & resolution.
